Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Where Does My Heart Live?

Where Does My Heart Live?

Where the fantails chirp hello
And flit between trees.

Where horses and ponies try to escape their paddock-prison,
Pacing up and down the fence line.

Where mud patches sit there innocently for days
As horses constantly tread on them.

Where magpies guard their territory with pride
And swoop down on the innocent sparrows.

Where flowers of all types 
Look in different directions as the wind blows them softly.

Where the rooster sings with pride
And wakes the world up, ready for another day.

This is my heart's true home.

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I am learning to use personification and use more detail in all of my writing.  I am going well because I think my learning is at Extended Abstract for example: ‘Where horses and ponies try to escape their paddock-prison, pacing up and down the fence line.’
My next steps are to help people more.

1 comment:

  1. Wow Carys I never knew you were so talented at writing!

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